Writing Children's Books: The 3 Commandments Of Picture Book Writing

Many beginners believe writing picture books are abook needs to inspire a different illustration. So count
breeze, but it requires a lot of skill to pack a storyout 36 words from your manuscript and note how
into a few words. If writing a picture book is yourbig a block of text that is on the page. That's about
dream, here are some tips to consider before youhow many words you can devote to each illustration.
begin:After that, your characters have to do something
1. Keep it simple. You should be able to sum up themove around, change locations so the illustrator will
plot of your picture book in three sentences. Nothave a new picture to draw.
every detail, of course, but the broad strokes. UseOne way to think in pictures is to convey the
one sentence for the beginning (naming your maincharacter's problem, and her efforts to solve that
character and the problem or conflict he'll face in theproblem, in concrete, visual terms. If your character is
story), one for the middle (describing the gist of thehaving trouble memorizing facts for school, that all
efforts your character makes to solve his problem),takes place inside her head. But if she's embarrassed
and one for the end (how he finally resolves thebecause she can't swim, then her attempts to learn
conflict and reaches his goal). If three sentencesare easily illustrated. Note: Some illustrations will span
doesn't capture the essence of your plot, then it'stwo facing pages, called a two-page spread. In this
probably too complex for a picture book.case, you'll have about 70 words for that one
Note: You're concentrating here on plot (the action ofillustration. But picture books are a mix of single page
the story), rather than theme (the underlyingillustrations and two-page spreads, so keep the action
message). Don't get into describing theme whenmoving at a good pace.
you're summarizing your plot. The theme shouldn't3. Keep a childlike outlook. Picture book characters
even be an issue at this point. You want to constructcan be children, adults, animals or fantasy characters.
the story so the character's actions, and how heBut all main characters must embody the sensibilities
changes because of those actions, implies a lesson toof a child between the ages of 4-8. This mean the
your readers.problem your characters faces needs to be relevant
2. Think in pictures. The term "picture books" says itand important to your target audience. The way
all: the illustrations are just as important as the words.your character tackles that problem must fit with the
The average picture book is 32 pages long, withway a child would tackle it. Don't create an adult main
about four pages of front matter (title page,character just so you can impose some adult wisdom
copyright page, etc.) So you have 28 pages of texton your readers. Grown-up characters using the
and illustration. If you aim for 1000 words to tell youremotional, illogical and sometimes messy coping
story (the average length of picture book text), thatstrategies of children can be a very effective, and
gives you about 36 words per page (some pages willfunny, storytelling technique. Above all, the character
have more words, some less, depending on themust be the one to solve the problem, using
pacing of your story).methods that are accessible to children. If readers
While you don't want to obsess over precise wordsee themselves in your main character, then they'll
counts when you're writing early drafts of yourunderstand the underlying message of your story.
manuscript, do keep in mind that every page of your