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I often say that my greatest wealth is my sister near her. It was all she had. All
library of writing books. One day, I that she suffered with her father raping
realized that only three of them ever and impregnating her twice, caused her to
mentioned the most important secret of feel ugly and black just like her father
good writing. A careful search turned up said. Out of that background, she was
repeated discussions on the following: motivated to accept her husbands
plot, dialogue, characterization, continued physical and emotional abuse.
description, viewpoint, pace and tone, Even her stepchildren abused her.
and voice. When we look at that back-story, we know
Other topics turned up more discussions: she could have no sense of self-worth.
how to write mysteries, how to write The man she married allowed his
romance, how to write drama, how to girlfriend to come and live in their
format manuscripts, create believable house and Celie cooked and cared for her.
characters, how to get paid, how to write Celie never gave up looking for her
the memoir, how to write the breakout sister and children, though. They were
novel, crafting scenes, editing fiction, what mattered to hr. Finally, her
and on and on. In all of that, I found husbands girlfriend, Shug Avery, gave her
only one paragraph on the greatest secret a sense of self-esteem and courage. Then
in writing a novel. It was only a half she created a clothes designing career.
page, and in another book, honorable Her motivation was to stay alive so she
mention. could see her sister and children.
After years of studying good writing, I In my novel, The Mayor's Wife Wore
wondered how that could be when without Sapphires, Indigo Tate wants Black people
it, stories are just paper dolls being to have a better image all over the
pushed through a benign plot that never world. She schemes her husband into
quite delivers. running for congress to get her out of
What happened that caused your character Compton and into Washington, D.C.
to want something so badly that his or society, where he could influence the
her action could have been only what was funding of their training program in
played out? That secret is Compton. When that falls through, she
calledMOTIVATION. schemes to get the press to make Compton
I'll use the books I consider well a Black Camelot. Since she cant get out,
written, fascinating, and standing the her city just has to become something
test of time: Gone With the Wind by special. She suffers every ridicule and
Margaret Mitchell. Scarlett O'Hara, her tragedy because of that desire.
main character wanted a man who didn't Ultimately, she becomes the mayor and
want to marry her, Ashley Wilkes. And she that motivation to succeed still burns
was going to get him at all cost. He was hot within her.
her motivation to do every unthinkable When we look at Indigos background, we
thing she did. She married Ashley's learn that she lived in a fine house
brother-in-law to be near him. She went until she was ten when her father gambled
from Atlanta to Savannah to stay with away the family home. One day the white
Aunt Pitty to stay with Ashley's wife, so sheriff came and threw the family out,
she could keep tabs on him when he would and she had to move into a small, dark
come home on furlough from the Civil War. house with a leaking tin roof. She began
She fought for Tara, her family's to dream of respect. She promised herself
plantation, for the sake of Ashley. She that she'd never give up on becoming
snatched her sister's beau and married somebody--somebody significant. Somebody
him to save Tara from a tax sale, knowing who could never be thrown out of her
that Ashley was coming back from the war home. Nothing could stop her from wanting
and would need a gentlemans plantation. Compton to be Camelot, wanting her home
He could still be the southern gentleman to be one of the finest in America. She
if she owned Tara. She was over the top brought the opera, the symphony and the
in love with a man who was never going to arts to townall motivated by her need to
marry her. heal the pain of being thrown out of her
Along with what drives a person to do lovely home as a child.
what he or she does, we have to What is your characters motivation? Most
understand the back story that caused beginning writers have no idea what their
them to be like they are: Scarlett was a characters want. They just write a lot of
spoiled brat, a daddys girl, rich, events and the story comes to a big
charming and lovely, the daughter of an climax out of thin air. The ending has
Irish father who doted on her and gave nothing to do with the characters desire.
her everything she wanted. She was also The story can never add up to more than
used to getting the men she wanted. She the sum of its parts. It never quite
wanted Ashley, but he wanted his cousin, becomes an organic whole, where all the
a simple girl, genteel and quiet. chapters have been melded together like
Scarlett, though, was the one who all the wet cement edges.
boys wanted to sit with at the barbecues. I guarantee you this: If you will sit
Why not Ashley? Having ASHLEY was her down and write what your character wants
motivation. Always Ashley! more than anything in the world, based on
Ashley married his cousin, Melanie, but why they want it, your story will lead to
that didn't stop Scarlett. She was a natural conclusion. It will last in the
determined to marry him, and we followed readers mind for a long, long time.
her through 700 pages to find out if she People will tie into the storys
gets him. That was the heart and spine of naturalness and stay with you to the end
that story. The ravages of war were just because they accept it as real. Isn't
backdrops, staging. that what all of us writers want?
From Scarletts background, all she did END###
was naturally motivated. And knowing her You have my permission to use this
motivation caused the tension. What article FREE if you do not change any
motivates your main character? Lets look part of it--my name or website address.
at a few examples of motivation to If you use it, you are obligated to
release it into your writing habit. notify me at It bears copyright under
The Color Purple, by Alice Walker: Celie the following website:
wanted to have her children and her Thank you.






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