A Conversation With Helen Barer Author Of Fitness Kills

Today, Norm Goldman, Publisher & Editor of isre-inventing the wheel. I found it very clumsy until a
pleased to have as our guest, Helen Barer author ofwriting teacher at the New School, in a class I'd
Fitness Kills.found called "Starting Your Novel," suggested I
Helen is a native New Yorker and has spent manyswitch to first person. All of a sudden I found my
years as a writer of non-fiction ranging fromvoice! Slightly smart ass, New York City, and
cookbooks to television documentaries.vulnerable. I loved it. The dialogue came very naturally
Norm:to me; it was the plot I struggled with.
Good day Helen and thanks for participating in ourNorm:
interview.Can you tell us how you found representation for
Helen:your book? Did you pitch it to an agent, or query
I'm delighted to have been invited.publishers who would most likely publish this type of
Norm:book? Any rejections?
How did you happen to write a book about a fitnessHelen:
ranch in Baja and could you also tell us a bit aboutI did pitch it to many agents, all of whom said 'very
Fitness Kills?well written, but not right for us - it's not hard-boiled
Helen:enough/sexy enough/ complicated enough/
I'm a big fan of fitness spas - I've been going to onestraightforward enough...' take your pick. It was more
or another for more than 20 years. About 12 yearsthan discouraging, But I'm in a terrific writing
ago, while struggling through an aerobics class at aworkshop, and two of the authors were published by
spa in Baja California, I looked around and thought itFive Star, an imprint of Thomson Gale that publishes
was like being on a cruise ship. We'd all arrived on amystery novels. I queried Five Star directly, sent the
Saturday, would leave the following Saturday, and inbook to them as an attachment to an email, and
the meantime got to be 'intimate acquaintances.'they accepted it almost immediately.
Fitness Kills is the story of Nora Franke,, a New YorkNorm:
City food writer who having broken up with herWhat challenges or obstacles did you encounter while
boyfriend, and having gained weight as a result,writing your book? How did you overcome these
accepted a temporary job as food consultant at suchchallenges?
a fitness spa. She is befriended by a group ofHelen:
regulars, and is caught up by their pain and loss asI'd had no idea how to write fiction; it was like
one, and then another, of the friends die. Nora'slearning a foreign language. I read a lot - other
primary employer back in New York assigns her tomysteries, writers about writing, etc. -- and went to
write an article about the deaths at the health spa,mystery conferences. Joining a writing workshop was
and she becomes invested in solving the murder (anda major step. Talk about challenges! They pulled and
keeping herself alive!).pushed me into writing and rewriting.
Norm:Norm:
What attracted you to the mystery genre?Was there anyone who really influenced you to
Helen:become a writer?
I like stories with a beginning, middle and end. As wellHelen:
as those with a strong central character - preferablyMy mother. She was never without a book, nor was
a woman - that have something to say about howI. She encouraged me to write even as a little girl;
we live today and what our values are.my first significant piece was a fourth grade project
Norm:called "My Life in the Wilderness." It got an A.
What do you believe are the essential ingredients ofNorm:
a good mystery novel?Many writers want to be published, but not everyone
Helen:is cut out for a writer's life. What are some signs
Suspense! And caring about what happens to thethat perhaps someone is not cut out to be a writer
characters. Which means, of course, that you haveand should try to do something else for a living?
to know the characters. Believability is also essential.Helen:
This is not a fantasy genre.Don't give up your day job! I actually waited until I
Norm:was nearly retired to write full time. Otherwise
Is your work improvisational or do you have a setthere's so much pressure. It also helps to have a
plan?thick skin.
Helen:Norm:
It starts off with a plan. Actually, I'm meticulous atWhat are your upcoming projects? How can readers
the beginning. I have a summary page, afind out more about you and your endeavors?
chapter-by-chapter outline, and know how it ends.Helen:
But the middle...that's the real mystery! As II'm almost halfway through writing my next Nora
established the characters' voices, I found they ledFranke mystery novel, while promoting this one.
me in unexpected directions.Check out my website,
Norm:Norm:
Helen, this was your first mystery fiction writingIs there anything else you wish to add that we have
project. Did you enjoy the process? How was itnot covered?
different from your typical format?Helen:
Helen:I can't imagine. You've been so thorough.
I'd never written fiction before. It was like