8 Steps To Writing A Great Children's Book Manuscript

Let's face it: some kids just don't like to read.get in the way of the forward movement of story.
Increasingly, parents, teachers, librarians, and editorsKeep the pages turning. * Concise chapters. Ideally,
are looking for books that will appeal to reluctanteach chapter should contain one clear event (or one
readers. When I was writing The Best Books for Kidsspecific point in nonfiction), and have an arc of its
Who (Think They) Hate to Read (Random House), Iown (a beginning, middle and end). This makes
read hundreds of children's books, old and new, that Ireading even one chapter a satisfying experience.
thought would fit the bill. I discovered that there areChapters that end on a high note in the action will
eight qualities possessed by great books for reluctantmake the reader want to see what happens next.
readers, and to my surprise some of my childhoodEpisodic novels (where each chapter stands alone as
favorites didn't pass the test. If you can work ata short story) are also good bets for reluctant
least three of the elements listed below into yourreaders. Richard Peck's A Long Way from Chicago
book, it will have a good chance of being loved by alland Louis Sachar's Sideways Stories from Wayside
kids, even those to whom reading is a chore. *School are two middle grade examples. * Kid
Humor. Making kids laugh is essential to building aRelevance. This applies to the themes and ideas that
pleasant association with reading. But you need toform the basis for plots or how an author
understand what tickles kids' funny bones atapproaches a nonfiction topic. These ideas should be
different ages. The humor in picture books is broadrelevant, meaningful, and applicable to the reader's life.
and very visual. Easy readers (and some pictureInstead of conveying a lesson your adult perspective
books for ages 6 and up) begin to introduce verbaltells you the reader needs to know, try using the
humor: wordplay, puns, double meanings. As kidsreader's frame of reference as a starting point. Write
move into the chapter book arena they can handleto your audience, not at them. And remember,
jokes that need a setup and a payoff that's playedbooks can be just for fun. * Suitable Text. Depending
out over several scenes. Dialogue, how characterson the age and ability of the reader, the text needs
react to each other, or the situation in which ato be challenging but not overwhelming. Strive to
character finds himself may be innately humorous. *write your story as clearly as you can, using active
Well-Defined Characters. Many kids want to identifysentences and concrete nouns and verbs. When
strongly with the characters in their books; forwriting for a broad age range of reluctant readers
reluctant readers, this is essential. It doesn't matter(8-12, for example), make the vocabulary accessible
what the character looks like on the outside (be itto the younger end, but the interest level appealing
space alien, a clown or a talking frog), on the insideto kids on the older end of the spectrum. * Unique
this character needs to embody the perspective ofPresentation. Reluctant readers often choose
the reader. This means the character is dealing withnonfiction over fiction because it speaks to their
issues the reader might face, or seeing the world in apersonal interests. Finding a new or unusual slant to
childlike way. Book characters must haveyour topic helps keep that interest alive. Humor
multidimensional personalities with strengths anddoesn't hurt either. It's Disgusting and We Ate It!
weaknesses in order for the reader to care aboutTrue Food Facts from Around the World by James
them and want to stick with them for the entireSolheim appeals to middle graders' love of the gross
story. In nonfiction such as biographies, authors whowhile sneaking in some history on the side. * Visual
find an element of their subject's life that is relevantAppeal. Authors generally don't have much say in a
to the target audience have a better chance ofbook's design, but author/ illustrators might. Larger
reaching reluctant readers. * Fast-Paced Plot. Kidstypeface, the generous use of white space, and
who love to read don't mind a story that takes aillustrations that elaborate upon the text all help break
few chapters to unfold, but reluctant readers don'tup the string of words and make the book less
have that much patience. The action needs to startintimidating to read.
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