Book Proposal Competing Books Section - How to Beat the Competition

You're an eager author. You have a great book idea.room for one more. Like yours.
You're all fired up about it and think it will sell likeThen there are books that may appear on Amazon
wildfire. So you're getting ready to pitch your idea tobut that are out of print. Don't even mention these.
literary agents and publishers. Of course you're goingThey're not your competition.
to use a book proposal to do that, and one of theFinally there are books that are in print and are selling.
things you're going to do is tell them that nobody hasYou can tell if a book is in print by looking at the top
ever written a book like yours before -- nobody, notwhere it mentions the price. If Amazon is selling it
Stephen King, not Michael Crichton, not anybody.new, then it's probably in print. This is your
Right?competition. But it's easy to deal with it.
Oops! You just went to and did a book search, andThe thing you want to do is admit that this book
to your great embarrassment, guess what? Hard toexists, that it is on your topic, but then immediately
believe, incredibly hard to believe, but you found thatsay something negative about it, or explain in a few
there are four -- count 'em -- yes, four books onwords why your book will be better or more popular.
your topic that have been published by other people.DEALING WITH COMPETING BOOKS
How dare they! How could they! Now what are you"Can you show me how to do this?" Sure, here's an
going to do?example. Let's say you're writing a book about sports
THE COMPETING BOOKS SECTION OF YOUR BOOKcars and the title of your book is going to be HOW
PROPOSALTO CARE FOR YOUR SPORTS CAR. Pick a popular
I'll tell you what you're going to do, and it's reallycompeting book and describe it and then knock it,
easy. Trust me, this is kid stuff. It doesn't matterlike this: "Going Faster! Mastering the Art of Race
how many books there are on your subject already.Driving (Bentley Publishers 2001) by Carl Lopez is all
It could be one or it could be a hundred, theabout race car driving and has very little information
procedure is always the same. You select the topthat would help the owner of a sports car. My book,
books that are your competition and you talk abouton the other hand, will be all about caring for your
them in your competing books section of your booksports car, including practical tips every reader can
proposal.use."
"Talk about them?" you ask. "Why should I evenThat was easy, wasn't it?
mention them? I don't want my publisher to knowSee what you did there? You described the
about them! They might not want to buy my book."competing book in one sentence. You wrote the title
Now, that's a natural first reaction. But think about it.and author, and you included the publisher and the
You can't prevent your publisher from knowing aboutdate of publication. Not only did you describe the
these other books. You found them easily enough bycompeting book, but in the same sentence in which
going on Amazon.com, didn't you? Well, guess who'syou described it, you also criticized it, that is, you said
on Amazon nearly every day? Yup, that's right. Yoursomething negative about it. No matter how great a
prospective literary agent and your new editor.book is, there's always something negative you can
These are professional book people. They virtuallysay about it because no book can cover everything.
live on Amazon. So don't think they won't find outAnd you're not saying this other book isn't a good
about these competing books.book. It may be a great book (if it is don't say that
"Then what am I going to do? They'll never buy myin your proposal!) but it just doesn't cover everything,
book once they see all this competition."and it doesn't cover what your book covers, namely
HOW TO KNOCK THE COMPETITIONHOW TO CARE FOR YOUR SPORTS CAR.
Let me share a secret that all nonfiction bookDeal with the top three or four competing books and
authors know. It's easy to deal with competingleave it at that. Once a publisher and literary agent
books. Sometimes the very fact that there aresee that your book proposal fairly deals with the
competing books is good for you. How? Well, itcompetition, they'll know that your title can hold its
shows there's a market for your type of book. Afterown in the marketplace. And that's going to help you
all, if there are fifteen other books selling likesell your book and land that publishing contract.
hotcakes about sports cars, chances are there's